February 6, 2009
For Immediate Release
Cache Valley Area Investors Association
160 N. Main St
Logan, Ut 84321
cachevaiai@gmail.com
Become Financially Independent
Love your job
LOGAN, Utah—Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA) wants to make you financially independent. President and Founder Preston Parker had this to say about his main objective for this association, “Our main objective is to help learn and apply philosophies that will lead them to financial independence quicker.”
If people learn the right mentality and approaches to investing, they can all be successful in what they desire. People should be able to spend their time doing something that they love, not just a job that provides income. Passive Income largely makes this possible. Cache Valley Area Investors Association (CVAIA) teaches people how to increase passive income. CVAIA embraces the Law of Attraction, Law of Abundance, and Law of Exchange. They practice the methods found in the ideologies of books including Rich Dad Poor Dad, The Wealthy Barber, The Millionaire Next Door, Atlas Shrugged, The Automatic Millionaire, and The Secret. CVAIA began in August 2007 and now has members from many geographic locations and from all walks of life. The members come together with the same belief: that education mitigates the risks of investing.
CVAIA offers many ways that you can be a part of this association. The first, and most common way, is that every other Thursday this association meets at the Logan Chamber of Commerce at 7 p.m. The next meeting will be February 19th, 2009. CVAIA also has a Facebook group that anybody can join. President and Founder Preston Parker also sends out an email once or twice a week to the associations email list. Recently CVAIA has created a website, www.cvaia.com where you can explore the different opportunities that this association offers.
For more info, contact:
Matt Ferris
Public Relations Advisor
Mferris@cvaia.com
253-312-2387
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Friday, February 6, 2009
Draft Press Release 3: Cause Promotion
Posted by usumatty at 2/06/2009 12:28:00 PM
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2 comments:
Don't repeat 'main objective' with the same words in your quote. Use other words that could lead up to your first quote.
I would break up the info in your second paragraph. It doesn't all flow together well.
I would rewrite your conclusion paragraph. You repeat 'President and Founder' twice. X the one in the conclusion. Use more words for conciseness. In the conclusion paragraph, you use too many words to tell people how and where CVAIA meet and do. Get to the point.
Good luck
I would rework your headline, maybe I am just a headline nazzi, but I think the headline is usualy the first and sometimes only thing that gets read. Try to mention the organization that has a cause.
I was also going to write about your conclusion paragraph, then I saw josh's comment. I thing he said it perfect.
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