LDS Church Break-in
Late last night on the corner of 900 N and 1600 E a Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints was broken into. Bishop Lawrence Shirk left the church t around 11 last night, and saw nothing suspicious in the area when he left. Bishop Shirk said, “Before I left a locked all the doors, but forgot to lock the windows, and the break happened in my office window” Bishop Shirk is the bishop of the Hillcrest 1st Ward. Shirk said, “these CPU’s were recently retired and had nothing confidential”
Robert(Bob) Knotz came is for his early maintenance rounds at around 6 in the morning, and knew something was wrong when he saw two smashed computer monitors in the hallway of the church. Knotz said that this is the first thing like this since he has been doing maintenance on the church in 20 years.
Deputy Sheriff Geoffrey Hasty is an investigator on this case and said, “this is a simple break-in, probably juveniles, we had leads and are currently doing our investigation.”
Thursday, January 31, 2008
Practice News Story 3: Crime
Posted by usumatty at 1/31/2008 09:32:00 AM
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You have all of the facts, which is foremost the most important thing. So good job. However, make sure not to make little errors, like forgetting to punctuate when appropriate or to put spaces where they are needed, or accidentally typing a letter in place of a different letter. Professor Parker will obviously be all over those types of things. By the way, I like your practice sports story, and I agree with your evaluation of what T.O. said in the press conference.
Great job! I liked how you incoporated quotes.
I liked how you got all the facts in, there are a few spelling and other problems, which makes sense because we write so fast. Rather than that I would work on little errors and making the story flow a little better.
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